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1. 即使是因?yàn)橐馑忌系男枰沟梦覀冎荒苓x擇某一句作為從屬子句,我們依舊有選擇從屬連詞的機(jī)會(huì):
Michelangelo’s Pieta was damaged by a madman recently.
Michelangelo’s Pieta is now displayed only behind a protective glass shield.
Because/ Since/ After Michelangelo’s Pieta was damaged by a madman recently, it is now displayed only behind a protective glass shield.
OR
Because/ Since/ After it was damaged by a madman recently, Michelangelo’s Pieta is now displayed only behind a protective glass shield.
這里的because和since表原因,after表時(shí)間。
請(qǐng)學(xué)習(xí)下面例句中各種形式含義的從屬子句:
例句:
Air traffic is closely controlled.
Flying is relatively safe/unsafe.
CONDITION: IF/ Provided that/ In case/ Assuming that/ Imaging that/ Supposing that air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively safe.
DEGREE: Inasmuch as/ Insofar as/ To the extent that air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively safe.
REASON:Because/ Since/ Considering that air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively safe.
TIME: When/ Whenever/ As long as/ While/ Once air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively safe.
PLACE: Where/ Wherever air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively safe.
OR
CONDITION: Unless air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively unsafe.
(negative)
CONTRAST: Although/ Even though air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively unsafe.
CONDITION: Whether or not air traffic is closely controlled, flying is relatively unsafe.
(alternative)
2. 另一方面,當(dāng)介詞短語(yǔ)修飾的是一個(gè)較短的主語(yǔ),那么該短語(yǔ)可以出現(xiàn)在該名詞的任意一邊,請(qǐng)看下例:
Calder’s art has exuberant simplicity.
Calder’s art represents a complex fusion of many elements.
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For all its exuberant simplicity, Calder’s art represents a complex fusion of many elements.
OR
Calder’s art,for all its exuberant simplicity, represents a complex fusion of many elements.
3. 兩句謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)類似的句子要合并的話,其中一個(gè)往往會(huì)使用到介詞——通常有after, aside from, before, besides, by, for, in,或者without——后面緊跟現(xiàn)在分詞ING形式:
Virginia Woolf wrote a lovely suicide note to her husband.
Then she drowned herself.
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Before drowning herself, Virginia Woolf wrote a lovely suicide note to her husband.
OR
Virginia Woolf, before drowning herself, wrote a lovely suicide note to her husband.
介詞with有時(shí)被用來(lái)引導(dǎo)獨(dú)立主格:
We crossed the river by ferry.
The bus accompanied us.
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We crossed the river by ferry, with the bus accompanying us.
4. 介詞短語(yǔ)可以被用來(lái)構(gòu)造平行結(jié)構(gòu),無(wú)論是通過(guò)配對(duì)的介詞或是同一個(gè)介詞一系列的重復(fù),都是可行的。使用配對(duì)介詞比如from-to, with-without, for-against可以起到相反事物的平衡作用:
The mad dancing epidemics of southern Europe in the Middle Ages have been blamed on everything from mildew in the rye meal to religious fanaticism.
而一系列的同一介詞的使用,可以用來(lái)列舉平行的觀點(diǎn):
The Chinese have built a society with an educational system radically different from ours, with aspirations challenging some of our most cherished values, and with a strong sense of mission at times enviable, at times frightening.
5. 外表與介詞短語(yǔ)相似的是副詞不定式。這些不定式通常由介詞to 或in order to引導(dǎo),后面跟隨的對(duì)象是動(dòng)詞原形: to see, to write, to daydream副詞不定式通常表示一個(gè)目的,目標(biāo)或是決心,是某人“想”做的一件事:
Your purpose is becoming a liberated woman.
You don’t have to act as a man is supposed to act, according to outdated stereotypes.
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To become a liberated woman, you don’t have to act as a man is supposed to act, according to outdated stereotypes
通常情況下,不定式被默認(rèn)為和句子的其他成分有著同一個(gè)主語(yǔ),特別是不定式較短的時(shí)候。但這一規(guī)則經(jīng)常被忽略,尤其是使用了通用的習(xí)慣用法,比如:to be sure, to tell you the truth, to put it differently, to begin with, to give an example:
I want to tell you the truth.
Melvin is incompetent.
To tell you the truth, Melvin is incompetent.
不定式做狀語(yǔ)既可以在句子的末尾也可以放在句子的開(kāi)頭:
Medical students serve an internship in order to gain first-hand experience before they officially enter into a medical career.
它們也可以放在句子中間,前后用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi),表插入語(yǔ):
Repeaters are given study materials designed especially for them, and, to avoid the stigma of studying with younger children, placed in classes with children their own age.
有時(shí)一個(gè)插入的不定式通過(guò)迫使讀者在它們之前停頓一下而達(dá)到特殊的強(qiáng)調(diào)效果。但該用法通常是在文學(xué)中使用,只作為欣賞,不建議大家使用:
Man is, to use the author’s own term, a superprimate.
不定式也能多個(gè)出現(xiàn),既可在主句之前,也可在主句之后。在多個(gè)出現(xiàn)的不定式短語(yǔ)中,除第一個(gè)to之外,其他的都被省略了:
To meet our energy needs, compete with foreign industry, build a projected 30 million new homes, and maintain our standard of living, we need staggering amounts of new capital.
最后一個(gè)例子說(shuō)明了不定式做狀語(yǔ)比用其他方法更為簡(jiǎn)潔和雅致的優(yōu)點(diǎn):
The Reverend Elisabeth Jans wants to erase the traditional image of God as a man.
The Reverend Elisabeth Jans refers to God as a woman.
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Because she wants to erase the traditional image of God as a man, the Reverend Elisabeth Jans refers to God as a woman.
OR
To erase the traditional image of God as a man, the Reverend Elisabeth Jans refers to God as a woman
但請(qǐng)注意和獨(dú)立主格連在一起的逗號(hào),或者象是破折號(hào)一類的是不能被刪除的。還有,邏輯關(guān)系也是值得注意的,時(shí)間先后順序不能顛倒哦。
總的來(lái)說(shuō),獨(dú)立主格在句子的當(dāng)中或是末尾的效果最好,但是,如果要表示原因或者結(jié)果的話就一定要放在句子的開(kāi)頭才有效果。
6. 與分詞短語(yǔ)和同位語(yǔ)一樣,獨(dú)立主格也可以連續(xù)使用,為渲染氣氛制造強(qiáng)有力的效果:
The arrested woman was slammed against a wall, her body frisked, her wrists handcuffed, her dignity lost.
Paul McCartney has been more successful than the other ex-Beatles.
Paul McCartney is the founder of Wings.
Paul McCartney, who is the founder of Wings, has been more successful than the other ex-Beatles.
在上面的例子中,關(guān)系從句通過(guò)增加細(xì)節(jié)來(lái)修飾名詞。而細(xì)節(jié)則能使作品更生動(dòng)有力。
關(guān)系從句通常可以被簡(jiǎn)化成其他更緊湊或是更有效的結(jié)構(gòu):
Jupiter has 11 moons.
Jupiter is the largest planet in the solar system.
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Jupiter, which is the largest planet in the solar system, has 11 moons.
OR
Jupiter, the largest planet in the solar system, has 11 moons.
7. 一個(gè)動(dòng)作的起因常常是由一個(gè)過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)來(lái)表達(dá)的;而一個(gè)同時(shí)進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作常常是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)來(lái)描述。
但有時(shí)現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)也能表示一個(gè)事件的起因:
Driving through the busy streets like a madman, he was stopped by the police.
分詞ing短語(yǔ)特別適合用來(lái)表示生動(dòng)的、動(dòng)作中的狀態(tài),也可以用來(lái)描述同時(shí)發(fā)生的事情。試比較下面兩句的差別:
Water lifted her body, caressed it, and carried her out into a misty sea.
(有動(dòng)作的先后)
Water lifted her body, caressing it, and carried her out into a misty sea.
(是伴隨的狀態(tài))
通常定義或識(shí)別一樣事物的方法就是描述它的性質(zhì),比如:
The Fresh Air Fund is a nonprofit organization.
The Fresh Air Fund gives impoverished New York City kids the chance to enjoy hills, animals, and trees.
8. 通常象這樣的整句是正確的。不過(guò)有時(shí)給一個(gè)名詞下細(xì)節(jié)定義的時(shí)候,可以通過(guò)使用同位語(yǔ)從句更簡(jiǎn)潔有力地進(jìn)行表達(dá):
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The Fresh Air Fund, a nonprofit organization, gives impoverished New York City kids the chance to enjoy hills, animals, and trees.
同位語(yǔ)可以通過(guò)補(bǔ)充對(duì)名詞下定義的細(xì)節(jié)來(lái)明確并拓展名詞的意思。但是,它們的范圍僅限于在同一個(gè)從句中,而不能是與名詞隔開(kāi)的句子或從句。換句話說(shuō),同位語(yǔ)能減少使用的從句數(shù)量并同時(shí)使剩下的從句變的更完整,更充實(shí)也更緊湊。
9. 在多種多樣的合并句子的方法中,請(qǐng)記得獨(dú)立主格是非常適合用來(lái)添加細(xì)節(jié)的。而把兩句話用獨(dú)立主格合并有兩種方法。一是刪除to be的謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)—比如is, are, was, or were。通過(guò)這種方法,完整句“Her head was slightly lowered over a pile of chemistry notes”就可以變成這樣的獨(dú)立主格:“Her head slightly lowered over a pile of chemistry notes.” 第二種方法是把主要?jiǎng)釉~變?yōu)?ing形式。如上期作業(yè)中的第三句:
The station wagon sped away.
The taillights disappeared into the distance.
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The station wagon sped away, the taillights disappearing into the distance.
獨(dú)立主格通常在句中或句末能更為有效地發(fā)揮作用,能為之前的陳述提供更好的細(xì)節(jié)。請(qǐng)看下例:
The accountant sat quietly in the office.
His eyes were closed.
我們可以用一個(gè)獨(dú)立主格取代有were的第二個(gè)完整句并使his eyes closed附在第一句上:
The accountant sat quietly in the office, his eyes closed.
如果愿意,我們還能省略“his”:
The accountant sat quietly in the office, eyes closed.
10. 分詞短語(yǔ)能給人以生動(dòng)形象的細(xì)節(jié)描述,使文章充滿樂(lè)趣。但我們?cè)撛谑裁磿r(shí)候在句中加入分詞短語(yǔ)呢?總的來(lái)說(shuō),要盡可能地把它們放置在離它們相關(guān)和修飾的詞最近的位置。請(qǐng)看例句:
She was driving without a license.
She was arrested and jailed by the sheriff.
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Driving without a license, she was arrested and jailed by the sheriff.
黑體字部分稱為“懸垂分詞”。
請(qǐng)注意,如果不重視該規(guī)則的話,寫出來(lái)的可能就會(huì)是晦澀難懂的怪句子:
Driving without a license, the sheriff arrested and jailed her. (×)
但請(qǐng)注意和獨(dú)立主格連在一起的逗號(hào),或者象是破折號(hào)一類的是不能被刪除的。還有,邏輯關(guān)系也是值得注意的,時(shí)間先后順序不能顛倒哦。
總的來(lái)說(shuō),獨(dú)立主格在句子的當(dāng)中或是末尾的效果最好,但是,如果要表示原因或者結(jié)果的話就一定要放在句子的開(kāi)頭才有效果。
與分詞短語(yǔ)和同位語(yǔ)一樣,獨(dú)立主格也可以連續(xù)使用,為渲染氣氛制造強(qiáng)有力的效果:
The arrested woman was slammed against a wall, her body frisked, her wrists handcuffed, her dignity lost.
posted on 2005-10-21 21:22 AERYU 閱讀(365) 評(píng)論(0) 編輯 收藏